ManiacMom
Registered: January 2009
Posts: 45
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Sat January 24, 2009 12:05am
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I like your experiment! Nicely done!
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atoworks
Registered: December 2008
Posts: 54
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Sat January 24, 2009 2:40am
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Interesting shot, interesting content. Creative idea.
But yet showing a few flaws.
The main subject, (hand and glass are a bit soft, and lack sharpness, including the first lamp. Some of the glass lack define contours and some part of it, are lost into the background. Maybe some reflector place on each side and infront of the glass would have help to give it more definition. None of the less, nice idea.
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Wanda
Registered: November 2008
Posts: 1,954
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Sat January 24, 2009 1:43pm
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I like you experiment. It is different and well though out. For 1600 ISO there is very little noise. I like how it sits here on the black background as well. Interesting indeed and I look forward to more of your artistic experiments. Welcome to PC.
Wanda
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Thegraduate
Registered: December 2008
Posts: 1,010
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Sat January 24, 2009 2:35pm
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Yep I see where your comming from, nice idear, we all have a differnt take on this type of work, maybe the sharpness and a bit more light on the glass.
I do like the composition.
Ciao
Gil
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Helkoryo
Site Admin
Registered: November 2008
Posts: 5,497
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Sat January 24, 2009 5:49pm
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A very nice idea here and well positioned.I agree on the sharpness and maybe to clone away the dark areas top corner of the shades, but still a well thought out and nicely composed image
Thank you for posting
kind regards Helen
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jamby
Registered: January 2009
Posts: 105
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Sat January 24, 2009 6:25pm
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Thank you All for your kind / constructive comments ....I just want to add in here that this is not the original version, the original version there was a window...about the cloning out of the dark part above the lamp, I have tried that out but that didn't went well the way I wanted it to be...so..I just leave it the way it is now..
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Helkoryo
Site Admin
Registered: November 2008
Posts: 5,497
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Sat January 24, 2009 6:35pm
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Hey there
Thanks for getting back to us and letting us know about the shot, if you like you can add plenty of detail in the description box when you upload the image, it will give us more of an idea of your shooting conditions too
kind regards Helen
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Wildspirit
Registered: January 2009
Posts: 106
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Sat January 24, 2009 9:13pm
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I think the shot is exceptionally composed and executed.
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josediogo1958
Registered: December 2008
Posts: 203
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Sat January 24, 2009 11:02pm
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Simple but effective composition,with superb effect.Congrats.
José Diogo
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