Helkoryo
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Registered: November 2008
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Mon February 23, 2009 10:58pm
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An interesting portrait here, I think your positioning is good but maybe the light just a tad strong for my taste ( I say my taste as we all have differing opinions) but I think with the white cards its just a tad glaring. he image itself is very well balaced and I like his stance and the eye contact. Check your lens for dust though as you have a couple of blobs showing one on his had and one thats a little embarassing on his trousers 
Thank you for posting and I look forward to seeing more of your work
Kind regards Helen
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yashica boy
Registered: February 2009
Posts: 701
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Tue February 24, 2009 7:07am
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Hi Helen,
thanks for the comment I noticed the blobs on the image & the sky light fliter needed a clean all ok nw & i have sorted out the photo file
best regards
Richard G
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Wanda
Registered: November 2008
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Tue February 24, 2009 12:11pm
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Hi Richard I agree with Helen on the spots but that is an easy fix. The light on the cards though is just a bit harsh. I really like how you have the gentleman looking right at the lens and the look in his eye. Great idea with the image and well though out.
Wanda
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Thegraduate
Registered: December 2008
Posts: 1,010
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Tue February 24, 2009 1:41pm
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I like the pose, and the expression on his face, maybe just a tadge to over exposed on the cards.
Gil
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veejaycee
Registered: February 2009
Posts: 5,689
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Tue February 24, 2009 5:10pm
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Yep, I agree drop the exposure a little and this would make a good poster for the magician.
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