Skykatt
Registered: January 2009 Posts: 321
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I like the perspective and light in this capture. Great mood and very well seen. A very good entry for today's theme. The composition is quite good as is but IMHO the composition could be improved by a crop on the left side into the outer branches of the tree and on the right to have the wires running into the top right corner. I also feel that a little bit taken off the bottom to the grass verge would help.
Regards, Phill.
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mcdonegal1
Registered: January 2009 Posts: 272
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Lovely light and entry for this week's theme. Very nice tones and mood. Great to see poles and wires looking interesting
Regards, Mary
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veejaycee
Registered: February 2009 Posts: 5,689
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I didn't expect to be impressed with this before I opened the thumbnail but I am. I like the composition just as you have it. We all have our own ideas of course but to my mind the whole format ratio is spot-on. Also yo need that small area a lighter path at the bottom to extend the separation twixt pole and ground. I really like the subtleness of the colours and the low sunlight hitting the underneath of the cables.
Yep - I like this - a lot.
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Thegraduate
Registered: December 2008 Posts: 1,010
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Hi Dave read your notes, sorry about how things are at the moment.
Great shot my friend, I love the light on the road, all those wires phew!!!
Take care
Gil
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lrw1966
Registered: November 2008 Posts: 3,889
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Hope you get to feeling better real soon, David. Marvelous composition for the theme, very nicely done.
Larry
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Helkoryo
Site Admin
Registered: November 2008 Posts: 5,497
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Hi there David
This my friend is an awesome shot and has to be viewed in full to really appreciate it. I love both the lighting and the composition here and what a superb shot for the theme.
I am very sorry to hear about your health and lord knows I dont envy you the dental work. I hope you can chill a little now and that things start to pick up for you soon my friend.
Thank you for posting
Kind regards Helen
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Els
Registered: November 2008 Posts: 1,489
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Silhouettes and light are just perfect here David.
Hope you are recovering a bit and just the mention of dental work gives me a creepy feeling, so take care,
hugs
Els
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