lrw1966
Registered: November 2008
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Mon November 23, 2009 3:20pm
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A wonderfully peaceful scene. Great vista. Very artistically presented.
Thanks
Larry
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Julie
Registered: February 2009
Posts: 1,400
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Mon November 23, 2009 3:36pm
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Warm and beautiful and such good feelings. Superbly done.
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Shimshams
Registered: April 2009
Posts: 584
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Mon November 23, 2009 5:58pm
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Nice scene well spotted. Great sunset. Something not quite right about the back of the mans seat and the womans head when enlarged. Is it that you had to burn them in to get details in the shot? You could try feathering the brush used to burn in a little. Just a thought
best wishes
Rob
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veejaycee
Registered: February 2009
Posts: 3,503
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Mon November 23, 2009 7:00pm
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The composition is good here but like Rob I think you've been a little heavy handed with the dodge/burn brush. A soft brush of low strength (about 2% in PS or Elements), to slowly guild up the lightening/darkening is a good place to start. However, there is a limit to what dodge/burn can do and what this picture really needed was an more powerful external flash to fill-in opposite the sunset.
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Helkoryo
Site Admin
Registered: November 2008
Posts: 5,098
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Tue November 24, 2009 9:53pm
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hello David
Another very nice shot here, I do agree with the previous comments regarding the effect on the seating but the view is magnificnet and I like the angle you have captured the beach.. seems a long way off from the dreary cold wet windy weather here right now lol
Thank you for posting
kind regards Helen
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Tincup
Registered: September 2009
Posts: 1,414
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Tue November 24, 2009 11:29pm
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To me, it looks like you moved those two people from another pic to the beach in PS. Am I right? The sunset itself and rolling waves are quite beautiful. I would have left it at that, maybe with a more pronounced panoramic presentation.
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