janper44
Registered: December 2009
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Tue January 5, 2010 6:45pm
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A calming feel is evoked by the setting with the opening in the fencing working to lead the eyes of the viewer through on to the expanse of the beach and the spread of the ocean. The cloud formation helps to enhance the visual impact of the picture in my mind.
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veejaycee
Registered: February 2009
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Tue January 5, 2010 7:30pm
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Perhaps a little short on midtone in the sand and right-side sky but then you may well have intended the high key look. I feel the gap in the fence is a little central and that cropping from the right would place the long grasses at either side border and serve to hold the viewer's attention within the frame.
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Jan Holland
Registered: July 2009
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Thu January 14, 2010 4:30pm
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Hello Steve.
Looks like a privid beach, all alone.
Nice B/W capture.
Regards, Jan
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marhowie
Registered: August 2009
Posts: 1,392
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Mon January 18, 2010 12:27pm
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Looks great Steve! Perhaps a bit off the right would improve the comp here?
Well done 
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wilth
Registered: January 2009
Posts: 787
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Sun February 7, 2010 5:43pm
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I kind of like the starkness of it all, the way you presented it, but I also agree that a bit of off center framing and composition would make it even better and more evocative.
Good job though, nice mood set.
Thanks,
Wilt
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poppy
Registered: March 2009
Posts: 966
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Hi Steve, I have been looking at a lot of your work. I think that you have a great talant. Your work is outstanding. Have a great day, Bill
If you have time, check out my website:
Bill Houghton Photography
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Paul Baybut
Registered: November 2011
Posts: 147
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Mon January 9, 2012 1:30pm
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Good b/w, a little front on for me but that may have been you intention, a more extreme angle vantage point may be interesting also.
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