Tony Mil
Registered: February 2009 Posts: 2,107
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Tue April 13, 2010 9:37pm
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Hi
Excellent composition with good details, dof, exposure and color.
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Tincup
Registered: September 2009 Posts: 1,421
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Tue April 13, 2010 11:33pm
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The wide angle and perspective really give this a dramatic look, as well as those huge clouds. Technically spot-on, although there may be a slight tilt. Still an impressive image!
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Wed April 14, 2010 12:06am
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Nice work! If this were my image, I would crop the bottom and on the right. The bottom to bring attention to the main subject and the right to remove whatever it is that is lighter than the rest...my eye keeps wandering to the right to see what that is.
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janper44
Registered: December 2009 Posts: 7,081
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Wed April 14, 2010 12:58am
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The green color of the rowboat along with the sunlight highlighting the sides of the boat makes it the focus of the viewer with the suggested cropping helping to give even more presence to the derelict rowboat.
Ever tried dried seaweed to eat... I think the smell of seaweed is a plus in comparison to the taste of seaweed, at least for me.
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Diane
Registered: February 2009 Posts: 4,092
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Wed April 14, 2010 3:05am
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Superb details documenting the demise of this old fishing boat. But your perspective is what puts this one over the top. WONDERFUL, Paula, and the saturation makes it pop right off my monitor.
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Jan Holland
Registered: July 2009 Posts: 1,866
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Wed April 14, 2010 9:55am
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Hello Paula.
Good looking picture, with the traditional old boat and the very nice cloudy sky.
Agree with Vuflie about the right side and a little crop.
Regards, Jan
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Julie
Registered: February 2009 Posts: 1,421
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Wed April 14, 2010 11:40am
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Nice perspective and fine comp. What a nice image.
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veejaycee
Registered: February 2009 Posts: 5,689
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Wed April 14, 2010 1:58pm
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I feel I'd like a little more space on the left - but - I suspect you were avoiding what looks like a mini rubbish heap on the left. The light area referred to on the right (a wrecked boat), distracts just slightly but simply burning-in the area suffices to reduce its importance. If you used HPF on this I'd suggest reducing the opacity to perhaps half.
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lrw1966
Registered: November 2008 Posts: 3,889
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Wed April 14, 2010 2:39pm
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Paula, Hi:
Beauifully composed and presented. Love the color - PoV - and depth.
Very Well Done.
Larry
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Paul
Registered: October 2009 Posts: 876
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Wed April 14, 2010 4:47pm
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It seems to be managing it's rotting just fine! Nicely done, Paula, although Vic has given good advice on the additional space to the left. Perhaps on the next visit to mum.
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Zebedee
Registered: June 2009 Posts: 1,204
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Wed April 14, 2010 9:33pm
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Thanks for the feedback - I posted a simalar image. Straightened, more room left, etc.. but deleted it again as I much prefer this post. I took lots of shots of this boat and keep coming back to this particular one.
cheers Paula
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jodice
Registered: August 2009 Posts: 2,365
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Thu April 15, 2010 3:58am
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I LOVE this! From the beautiful clouds to the peeling paint. Nicely composed shot!
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poppy
Registered: March 2009 Posts: 966
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Fri April 16, 2010 12:33pm
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Great shot of this old boat. Nice sky. Have a great weekend, Bill
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marhowie
Registered: August 2009 Posts: 1,392
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Beautiful sky..so if you just keep your nose up, that smelly seaweed ain't so bad:)
Great detail, colors, and depth.
Well done.
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